Hey! I've been trying to learn animation, and i saw there was no good vaporeon dom video, so I uploaded this. Lmk if I should keep going or if it's just mid. This took me 40 hours!
^ Pretty good. My only complaint is that the parts where you edited things (example the closed eyes at the end) seemed to stand out. I think you could blend the colors more to make things look more natural. This is just my constructive criticism and I understand if you dont care what I have to say. Fact is youre the one who put in the work and you are the decider on if you like it or not. Props to taking so much time to work on something like this. Thats pretty neat.
Yeaahhh, I'm well aware of that issue, I had the option to fix it a few times but because of way had set everything up it would have taken a good bit longer to finish, and it was like 11.pm at that point so I just finished it and went to bed. If I make another project in the future though, it definitely won't have that problem.
keep going! everyone starts somewhere and this really doesnt look bad at all! I gotta point out at the end when it goes fast, that the tail kinda glitches back and forth yk? to avoid this, I make sure I set a consistent speed on certain parts, so it doesnt clip back and forth unevenly. defiently watch the layers when your animating, since the tail is clipping into the shoulder too at the end! nice job though!
Thank you! I didn't even notice that when I was watching back for any errors, I think both those issues stem from me not deleting the parameter that goes behind the shoulder when I decided to scrap the larger range of motion.
This is honestly pretty good, I've followed Burgerkiss for about 2 years now and have been hoping someone would try and animate a couple panels of their work. I don't have any major concerns that haven't already been listed, but I can still offer support!
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