Nah cuz actually on some real shit cuz its the creator posting this, Im too lazy to go through and read all the dialogue on all the images youre posting, but I think with just by adjusting and playing with your formatting you can actually make something really dope. The blocks of text where characters just go back and forth speaking a paragraph of content one after the other per slide will probably make things feel a bit unnatural. I trust the vision, I think youre on the track to something cool, just keep picking at it. Maybe peep somebody like Swirlin and some of his more complex edits? Anyways Im done rambling, Im talking as much as the chicks in the pic lmfao
Note that most of my narrative content is in longform prose; this series is the only time I've put such extensive dialogue in the images themselves, for the very valid reasons several have pointed out by now.
^^ Based creator B) I also forgot to mention Jack Cayless/Rapscallion alongside Swirlin, cuz he also has a lot of dialogue in his work and he does a good job spacing it out and making a clean presentation, even if in some situations, it can go on for a while. I will read through this when I have more energy! And I trust that it will be pretty damn good. I think if you wanna write something really long, you absolutely should! Dont be discouraged by anybody here, all Im saying is it looks kinda wonky the way it is now. But again, that does not mean that I think you should stop! Keep pushing, king, Ill keep an eye out for your future work! <3
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