Anonymous >> #1468055
Posted on 2018-12-30 22:53:01 Score: 64 (vote Up) ( Report comment )

Ok, the island is nice and all, but why does it take till 1:00 for the actual characters to show up?

Monster_Sam >> #1468069
Posted on 2018-12-30 23:04:09 Score: 42 (vote Up) ( Report comment )

Anon #1468055 ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ just experimenting with stuff. I still have a lot of things to improve and learn (animation, texturing, etc) And I definitely will. I also will try a bit different format that will include a little storyline. And will look much more different.
Also vid doesn't opens for me, how did you watched it? O_o

Andi_(YOUR_bi-trap) >> #1468071
Posted on 2018-12-30 23:05:10 Score: 9 (vote Up) ( Report comment )

It looks good... But thats literally all

nexus763 >> #1468120
Posted on 2018-12-30 23:48:05 Score: 10 (vote Up) ( Report comment )

I came just fomr the technical and artistical quality of this.

Monster_Sam >> #1468142
Posted on 2018-12-30 23:59:07 Score: 5 (vote Up) ( Report comment )

I feel actually that I'm failing at this. Really lacks artistic approach, quality animation, texturing, etc. Posted it because I'd rather start anew another project than spend weeks remaking this one almost entirely. Besides, tentacles are quite glitchy and tricky thing to animate in the first place. Anyway, will do better next time.

Anonymous >> #1468393
Posted on 2018-12-31 02:47:43 Score: 15 (vote Up) ( Report comment )

Your technical style is very good, and your progress is showing from looking at your gallery. You should look into getting a voice actor for some sound, that might lift your videos a bit as you continue. Also a bit of movement and facial expressions may be next on your list to master? Little things that will put you up with the best in this game. Keep at it!

Anonymous >> #1468678
Posted on 2018-12-31 05:57:18 Score: 8 (vote Up) ( Report comment )

Yeah dude i love your work, and i cant pretend to know much about animation. But maybe just add in some emotion from the girl, like even a little squirming or something. Stuff like that really adds some flavor rather than her just laying there. Other than that, please keep doing what you do!

spazstrike >> #1468687
Posted on 2018-12-31 06:04:59 Score: 4 (vote Up) ( Report comment )

All id ask for is to see him bust a fat load in her lol

Anonymous >> #1468790
Posted on 2018-12-31 07:08:58 Score: 12 (vote Up) ( Report comment )

Nah don’t feel like a failure or anything man. I think it’s actually pretty good, except for one thing mainly. The character needed a bit more life, you know? Like at first when she was looking at the tentacles, she had a straight face and just wide eyes, didn’t really blink or anything. Just give the character a little more expression and I think it’s pretty good

Anonymous >> #1469066
Posted on 2018-12-31 09:20:33 Score: 1 (vote Up) ( Report comment )

Nice but 1 minute for action, is a lot ¡¡¡