Really nice work. I love seeing magic used like this.
Suggestion: You might want to take things a little slower or draw things out a bit longer. Let things linger for a while so the viewer can really absorb it. Right now, I think things are going by a little too quickly to really get into them.
Possibilities:
- Guy's orgasm lasts longer - Girl just holds the guy's dick for a while after he cums - Guy relaxes a bit, dick starts going down - Girl gives guy a naughty smile, holds eye contact for a few seconds, then uses her magic to make him hard again, with the usual glow effect - Guy could get hard in an instant or it could take a second or two. He could appear to just enjoy it or he might jump a bit from surprise. Either one is hot in its own way. I like the idea of a relentless woman forcibly pleasuring me, so having the guy jump would convey that tone.
Having the guy be naked while she's clothed is a nice touch, too. It reinforces her dominance, as does her holding him in her lap.
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Suggestion: You might want to take things a little slower or draw things out a bit longer. Let things linger for a while so the viewer can really absorb it. Right now, I think things are going by a little too quickly to really get into them.
Possibilities:
- Guy's orgasm lasts longer
- Girl just holds the guy's dick for a while after he cums
- Guy relaxes a bit, dick starts going down
- Girl gives guy a naughty smile, holds eye contact for a few seconds, then uses her magic to make him hard again, with the usual glow effect
- Guy could get hard in an instant or it could take a second or two. He could appear to just enjoy it or he might jump a bit from surprise. Either one is hot in its own way. I like the idea of a relentless woman forcibly pleasuring me, so having the guy jump would convey that tone.
Having the guy be naked while she's clothed is a nice touch, too. It reinforces her dominance, as does her holding him in her lap.
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