Anonymous >> #1109502
Posted on 2018-03-28 18:47:59 Score: 9 (vote Up) ( Report comment )

why does everything look weird?
I don't mean to be rude, I'm weird enough to be into this stuff
But Shiro, man, take some time to work on your models, proportion wise, and maybe take a few extra look at your animations, camera angles and placements...

For starters, I can't see her other hand, so it looks like she only has one arm...

When leaning in to suck a nice cock, it'd be easier to spread the legs with both hands so, you know, you don't get decked by the knees while deep throating...

Appart from all that, I can see you're still quite new at all this, so I'll give you some slack and fix the tags for you.

Keep it up, and maybe I'll get to see some more Elin action from ya~

ShiroSFM >> #1109805
Posted on 2018-03-29 01:38:13 Score: 9 (vote Up) ( Report comment )

Cheers for the comment, I won't write an essay but not to sure on a few of your points though.

Her hand stays underneath fondling his nads. You can clearly see the other arm, it's only obscured fully by her hair when she goes in deep.

Indeed that would be easier, if she was spreading his legs. Idea was that she's using one hand to push down whilst like i said, the other fondles his balls.

Not sure about the decked by the knees bit too, only bit that comes close is when he twitches when she starts, which isn't unusual.

Thanks for the feedback!

Anonymous >> #1121732
Posted on 2018-04-09 02:41:48 Score: 3 (vote Up) ( Report comment )

Says the annonymous guy with no art to his credit. You're inability to see her right arm isn't because it's not there but because you are unobservant. Personally, I like it when a girl fondles my balls during and sexual position where she can reach them.

FortunateFeline >> #1142283
Posted on 2018-04-29 05:11:10 Score: 1 (vote Up) ( Report comment )

It looks weird because bad topology. You can see the edges pinch around her mouth and top of her cheek suggesting either bad rig weights or fucked up edge loops.

idk if the animator made the model but there's no "laugh line" edge loops, the face rig is being pushed too far causing stretching, and there's clipping between her hands and the cock.

The lighting looks off too. You're hit with an "uncanny valley" vibe because you expect a toon type shader with these anime-esc characters. Inverted hull and flat shading would cover up 90% of those weird stretching/poking/pinching/clipping artifacts from poorly made models. Use "style" make up for any lack of technical ability (hence why Minus8 is a porn god despite not being very technically impressive at drawing)

RiuGrimm >> #1746511
Posted on 2019-05-12 15:56:25 Score: 0 (vote Up) ( Report comment )

Gods I would love to have my cock swallowed like that <3