Anonymous >> #1064845
Posted on 2018-02-15 06:18:11 Score: 28 (vote Up) ( Report comment )

jeez so much hate, chill bro. how about... not watch it?

Weird_Dude >> #1064961
Posted on 2018-02-15 09:18:24 Score: 16 (vote Up) ( Report comment )

Thats his first one so let him try that again and maybe he'll get Better!

HoneychanSFM >> #1064989
Posted on 2018-02-15 10:22:05 Score: 18 (vote Up) ( Report comment )

You don't like it, fine i got it ! No need to be rude anon.

Anonymous >> #1064997
Posted on 2018-02-15 10:38:27 Score: 5 (vote Up) ( Report comment )

this was good first attempt definitely fappable, all i say you need to work on is that mouth was it was bit distracting but everything else was good imo

Cearan >> #1065157
Posted on 2018-02-15 14:16:00 Score: 7 (vote Up) ( Report comment )

Instead of being an asshole, try to give a criticism.
Everyone needs to start somewhere and improve.
With proper criticism you can help someone improve.
By calling it awful and never saying why it's awful you just discourage the artist.

stimpyyy >> #1065654
Posted on 2018-02-16 00:00:27 Score: 2 (vote Up) ( Report comment )

the cum swallowing at the end was cute ;3
but the mouth just deforms too much, just use a realistic size penis and it should work just fine imo

HoneychanSFM >> #1065725
Posted on 2018-02-16 01:19:56 Score: 8 (vote Up) ( Report comment )

Indeed, the frame by frame mouth animation was a real struggle... I won't make the same mistake next time !
Anyway, thank you guys for your advices/criticism.
It'll help me improve ;)

Anonymous >> #1065911
Posted on 2018-02-16 05:32:57 Score: 12 (vote Up) ( Report comment )

Love the whole penis swelling up concept, it emphasizes how big the load was, really hot how she was chugging cum for a minute

Anonymous >> #1065924
Posted on 2018-02-16 05:40:09 Score: 5 (vote Up) ( Report comment )

That was really good for a first animation Honeychan! You should make it explode in Samus throat next time. Thatd be amazing!

Anonymous >> #1066405
Posted on 2018-02-16 18:20:46 Score: 6 (vote Up) ( Report comment )

Sure maybe not best quality animation but the sounds and Samus's facial expressions really make it. especially her eyes rolling back as she struggles to swallow the massive load he gives her was a nice touch. Looking forward to your next work Honeychan!