Wanted to try to make a quick loop and it ended up taking far more hours than I thought it would do, and there's still blatant issues with the bones that just refuse to fix themselves because of pretty shoddy rigs I keep using.
Primarily just wanted to use this Link model for something. Criticism, constructive or not, is always welcome.
Hey, not too bad of work. In my opinion, the 2 biggest things to work on, are the over exaggerated animation and the choppiness of said animation. I know you said the rigs aren't too good, but just keep it in mind. Like I said, pretty good work considering, and your openness to criticism is good too. Keep practicing and improving, and I look forward to the animations in the future. (And keep up with the futa on male, we can always use more ;^) )
I'm always open to ideas on how to make the movements less exaggerated, I'm not exactly sure how to make a good thrusting motion since rigs do behave in a more realistic way - but each part moves way more than you would if you moved that part yourself. It feels like I often get movement that's either pretty dull like my Harley animation or way too lively like the Pharah/Tracer/This one and I'm not precisely sure how to get the good middle-ground.
honestly shiek's exasurations look fine. it's when links head comes down is my problem with it, doesnt fit with it i guess. maybe show link getting pushed and pulled by shiek's reaming? like, show some subtle push and pull? just some rookie's opinion.
^^ i think some oval circular motions would be my solution to this, start it with a forward arc pushing, then bring it back in (completing the oval motion) by pulling out. this part is just added flare but maybe show link after two or three reps grinding on shiek, followed up with some sassy wink?
Thank you for all the feedback, I'm going to hold back on releasing anymore webms until I can get it all in order and it actually looks good. I've also reached out to some of the better sfm creators out there for a bit more in-depth information. Thank you for being patient with me, it's certainly not easy to learn SFM. At least not as easy as I originally thought it might be.
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Primarily just wanted to use this Link model for something. Criticism, constructive or not, is always welcome.
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Thats Twilight Princess ganondorf in the back nodding in approval
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Thank you for being patient with me, it's certainly not easy to learn SFM. At least not as easy as I originally thought it might be.
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