2 comments (0 hidden)

somebody28 >> #855967
Posted on 2017-07-01 06:24:22 Score: 5 (vote Up) ( Report comment )
A few small things.

- Watch the sides of her mouth. They can look very linear and sharp, which throws you off a bit.

- Throw a wince, or a flinch, or some sort of acknowledgement when he goes for the deep stroke. You want to emphasize that she felt that one.

Overall though, good job. His thrusting is done well, and I like how her body rocks a bit each time.

Anonymous >> #856366
Posted on 2017-07-01 20:56:27 Score: 4 (vote Up) ( Report comment )
bruh all I care about in this motherfucking video is that he is happily getting head and she is happy and enjoying giving a head.

1