Peachy66
06/19/23 12:55AM
Fanfic advice? (Noncon warning)
So, I want to write a noncon fic between a futa and a cis girl. For context, futa is a yandere and goes insane, but still treats the girl gently.

I want to make the fic hot for people who enjoy noncon, but I've never written stuff like that before. Any advice would be appreciated!
Peachy66
06/19/23 04:44AM
T-Lesbian-F said:
Well if I were to give you any advice I first want to ask if the fic involves any already existing characters or if it’s all original characters that you have created?

Kinda a mix of both. It's for a game called "Degrees of Lewdity", which allows you to make your own customizable character. A character named Robin is the cis girl in the fic, and the futa is my character named Yui.
(Also this is my first time replying to another comment so I apologize if I'm doing it wrong)
R34Girl
06/19/23 04:45AM
If you don't want to go full rape, Eventual_consent is your friend. Is it a 3rd or first person account?
Peachy66
06/19/23 04:53AM
R34Girl said:
If you don't want to go full rape, Eventual_consent is your friend. Is it a 3rd or first person account?

3rd person!
LunarShado
06/19/23 04:59AM
A tip I have for any writer is always have a thesis, a summary sentence or paragraph, to state what the point of whatever it is you’re talking about. More broadly it applies to exposition over narrative but the thesis is key, that would be whatever the conflict/resolution is. Don’t settle for the first draft either; be willing to rewrite potions that don’t exactly work smoothly. Don’t be afraid of the thesaurus either, because that can be especially useful to keep your dialogue as diverse as possible.
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