justmepo
01/29/17 01:45AM
opinions about my artwork
howdy guys and gals of r34. i just wanted to know your opinions about some of my stuff. they're drawings that have stories that go with them:

part1
he4rt-br34k.deviantart.com/art/Rica-and-Aaron-586594299

part2
he4rt-br34k.deviantart.co...The-Prison-Riot-613665587

well, it'd be great if you could tell me what you think about the picture and the narrative.

thanks.



bipface
01/29/17 02:26AM
justmepo said:
. . .

Looks like you've got some real potential here; I'm not really an artist myself, but I can suggest a few areas for improvement (in the images):

- Drawing some additional details in the eyes would make a huge difference; you might have to thin the lines or draw the eyes slightly bigger to make room for it though

- Your anatomy is quite accurate for the most part, but be sure to double-check arm lengths vs leg lengths. Remember elbows reach the waist, hands reach mid-thigh.
Best to do proportion adjustments on rough sketches or skeletons, using all the tools at your disposal (select, measure, scale, rotate, warp, etc.)

- Details in the ears would be good; no need to go overboard when drawing in cartoon-ish styles, but as with the eyes a little detail adds life to the characters. Or you can cover the ears with hair, that works too.

- The shading is a good start, but it needs to be less subtle / less soft to appear realistic. I'm not too sure what else to say about shading, maybe ask a more experienced artist.

- Draw lineart at a higher resolution; I reckon at least double the canvas sizes you're using now, if your PC can handle it.

- Try to 'sharpen' the lineart to avoid rounded endings; this mainly applies to the tips of the hair and the creases of the clothes

That's all I can think of for now. Hope this helps; keep it up!
Kinky_Pie
01/29/17 02:51AM
Damn! Damn! Damn!
I just started drawing and started to like it too.Now I feel like my artwork is shit! >;P
bipface
01/29/17 08:41AM
Kinky_Pie said:
I just started drawing and started to like it too.Now I feel like my artwork is shit! >;P

Don't worry, pretty much everyone will feel this way when starting out with any art form.
Try not to set too higher expectations; work towards small achievable goals.
Focus on aspects you feel like you can improve, rather than dwelling on the stuff that seems over your head. With practice over time, you'll be itching to try out techniques which seemed impossible before.

I say this as a self-taught musician/composer, not as a drawing artist.
justmepo
01/30/17 09:45AM
bipface said:
[quote]justmepo said:
. . .


thanks for the constructive critique. i'll take note of what you said and keep the advice in mind.
Qzwxec
02/02/17 08:35PM
Can u make foot fetish one
justmepo
02/10/17 09:32PM
Qzwxec said:
Can u make foot fetish one


i'll cater to that fetish in the future.

btw, once i'm ready to upload my hard NSFW works here in r34, i'll change my name to he4rt-br34k.
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