juicyholes
12/10/14 10:15AM
Another Erotic Fiction
Hey all,

I wrote a very sexy story about two studs who fuck in a gym. This is the kind of RP I would like to do as well. Let me know what you think.

It was a Tuesday night, and as such it was on my schedule to head to the 24 hour gym where I have a membership.
I was 17 years old at the time, and a senior in high school. I was involved in a lot of sports and extracurricular
activities, and as such I could only make it to the gym during some of their least busy hours. Although it was
usually late at night when I could get a chance to get in an extra workout at the gym, keeping my fit form was
important to me, and so I did what I had to do to make it work.

Although only at an average height, about five feet and 8 inches, I had worked hard over the years and acquired a
very desireable physique. I was cute to boot, what with my blue eyes, creamy caucasian complexion, and my short yet
roguishly appealing black hair. A lot of girls in my school were interested in me. I, however, had, shall we say,
other(italic) interests.

The gym was usually more or less empty at this time of the night, but I nevertheless came prepared each Tuesday
night. At the times When I went to the gym, I made an effort to carefully choose the sexiest workout outfit I could
find. On this particular night I had chosen a pair of black silk short shorts which would serve to accentuate my
firm yet voluptuous buttocks, and my sleek, muscular thighs. The shirt I was wearing was a white sleeveless
wife beater which was a little too short for me. This of course, was also part of my strategy. Having a long-
standing appreciation for classic fashion, I had chosen to wear my oldest pair of black and white converse all-
star high tops.

I entered the sparsely populated gym and checked in with the vacant attendant at the front desk. Tonight it was
a chubby Hispanic male, more concerned with whatever he was doing on his phone than the goings on in the rest
of the gym behind his back. After signing in I always started my workout with a little cardio on the eliptical
machine. After about ten minutes I had worked up a decent sweat and got my heart rate going. I went upstairs to the
area where all the weight lifting was done, and briefly surveyed the area. Across the room was an older man, maybe
in his mid 60's, pathetically curling a thirty pound barbell. A little closer to where I was standing was a college
aged girl with blonde hair, doing squat thrusts in the corner. Slightly disappointed but undeterred I began my own
regiment with some pull-ups and some lateral excersises. It seemed as though it would be yet another uneventful
evening.

And lo, after approximately fifteen minutes there entered a ray of hope. He was taller than me, standing at about
six feet and 3 inches. He must have been about 26 or 27 by the looks of him, and he had the body mass of a
true body builder. This hunk of man had a lightish brown crew cut and big brown eyes. His chin was chisled as if
it had been crafted by a master sculpter. The same apparently applied to other parts of his body as well, but
more on that later.

"Probably straight as an arrow," I thought, and continued my regiment as usual. Over the next twenty or thirty
minutes though, I started to notice him frequently looking in my direction. I wasn't sure if I could confirm
his interest in me, so I decided to give him a bit of a show and guage his reaction from there. I casually
moved into his line of sight, while still keeping a reasonable distance. I faced the mirror and kept my back
turned to this sexy stud muffin. Pretending to stretch, I widened my legs and slowly bent over, sliding my
hands down my toned legs and grabbing my ankles. I quivered a little as my shorts wedged themselves in between
my ass cheeks. Peeking up at the mirror I could see this hot hunk of man meat's eyes fixated on my tight butt.
I could have sworn that I saw him lick his lips. Thinking quickly, I devised a plan.

After letting the guy watch me for several minutes, I headed over to the bench set, and loaded an amount of weight
that was just a little bit too much for me. I began to lift and after a few repetitions I began to struggle. To
my excitement, the man approached me.

"Need a spot, bro?" He asked, slightly amused, but with a devious smirk on his mouth.

"That would be great if you don't mind. Sure," I replied. "I'm Damon," I said. "What's your name?"

"I'm Colin," he said with a smile. "Nice to meet you, Damon."

"Likewise," I said, preparing to lift. "Ready?"

"Whenever you are," said Colin, and I began to lift. I think it was during my second set when I intentionally
slid up the bench to where my face could be alligned with Colin's crotch. I could notice the beginning stages
of a bulge taking place under his tight bicycle shorts, which ended at the middle of his monstrous thighs.
The sight of his bulge, and the light scent of his ball sweat through his shorts shot a sensation through my
body which perked my own penis' interest. Colin didn't say anything, but looking up at him, I could tell that
he had noticed.

Being the confident cock warrior he was, Colin made the first move by intentionally moving his hips forward,
his now growing bulge grazing the bridge of my nose. This in turn added to my own excitement, which Colin took
as an invitation to continue. Looking around the gym, we could see that we were now the only two people left in
the building, save of course for the attendant at the desk at least twenty yards away and obscured by machines
and the building's support columns. As colin increased the frequency of the contact made between his covered
genitals and my face, I began to gain more of my own confidence.

"If you keep doing that," I finally said, "You'd better be looking for something a little extra."

"what might you have in mind?" Colin asked, a devilish grin spanning his lips.

"Can I show you?" I asked, laying the barbell down on its supports and placing my hands on his hard, rippling
thighs.

Colin looked around and with a shrugh he said, "By all means, cutie pie."

"I always like to get a steam after exercising. The workout usually only gets hotter in the steam room." I said.

"As do I," said Colin. "By all means, lead the way."

I stood up from the bench and the two of us passed through the locker room to the pool area where the steam room
was located. I could barely contain my growing arousal as we entered hot, steamy chamber. Colin closed the door
behind us and I removed my shirt, a thin layer of sweat already adding shine to my rippling, slender core. Colin
followed suit, tossing his shirt onto the tile bench which lined the length of the wall. His half naked body
reminded me of the Greek gods of myth.I could see myself becoming engulfed in his hurculean embrace, his powerful
arms holding me tight against his massive chest and abdomen.

I slowly approached the shiny man-god, who waited in anticipation. I slid my hands around his slick, rock-hard
waist. He in turn wrapped his arms, like the trunks of trees, around me, sliding his large, masculine hands
up and down my sweaty back. Our lips met in a passionate kiss as our members made contact with each other
beneath our shorts. As we kissed, Colin slid his hand down the back of my shorts, groping at my firm buttocks. I
slid my tongue into his mouth and he slid his fingers between the cheeks of my ass.

"Mmm.." I moaned, wiggling my behind to allow his fingers better access to their obvious target. We could feel
our pricks swelling against one another as colin stroked my anus gently with his middle finger. I pulled my
lips from his, and kissed a trail down his well-built pectoral muscles, and over his eight-pack abs as I lowered
myself to my knees. Finally I was eye-level with his impressive bulge. I looked up at Colin, who gave a lusty
sigh as I ran my hands up his thighs. Slowly I curled my fingers around the waistband of his shorts and pulled them
down to his ankles. He stepped out of his shorts and kicked them to the side, now wearing nothing but his shoes
and a pair of classic white briefs.

I slid inward, closer to his crotch, and as I pressed my face against it, I began to salivate as I felt the pulse
of his massive manhood which awaited my services. I kissed his cock over his briefs, opening my mouth wide over
its head, letting my warm breath break against it.

"Ooh you're a big boy aren't you?" I said with a giggle. "May I please see it?" Colin couldn't say much, except:

"Uhnn.. Yeah. Take it out, baby." Of course I was happy to oblige. I looked up into Colin's eyes and bit my bottom
lip as I slowly peeled open the hole in the front of his briefs. Reaching my right hand into the opening, I gently
pulled out his near full erection. My eyes widened and a little gasp escaped my lips as I feasted my eyes on
his beautiful phallus, which was adorned with a dolphin style piercing.

"Wow.." I said, looking back up into Colin's eyes. "That's one big fucking dick.." I began working his shaft with
my hand slowly, gently twisting at the head and base. The god-like cock throbbed warmly in my hand until it reached
its full length. It must have been eleven inches long and four inches thick. My mouth was seriously watering now.
Lifting up his dick to expose its underside, I ran my tongue upward along his shaft from the base and flicked it
against his cockhole. I repeated this measure several times, looking up lustfully at Colin as I did so. Colin
closed his eyes, and saying nothing, leaned his head back in pleasure. Once I could resist no more I puckered my
lips and touched them to his helmet head. Pushing my lips down over his knob, my lips widened to accommodate the
rest of his thickness.

Colin's meaty cock was so savory, like a smooth, sweaty sugarcane. It was so irresistable, I became driven by a
primal urge to take his full length in my mouth. I did so, surprising myself, as well as my recipient, as my throat
muscles loosened, allowing me to take Colin's full length down my throat to its hilt. Slowly I elevated my mouth
back up to his cock's head where I applied suction. As I lowered again, I ran my hands up the backs of his thighs
and up under the back of his briefs, massaging his hard yet luscious ass cheeks. Colin ran his hands through my
hair, pulling it and guiding my head as it bobbed up and down over his juicy cock.

After several minutes I pulled my mouth from his cock to catch my breath. A long stream of precum ran from his tip
to my bottom lip. I aptly approached his cock with mouth again, licking the precum from the tip of his dick. I
looked up at him again, my face now flushed with uncontrollable desire.

"My God... Your cock... It tastes so good." I said, almost out of breath. "I want to drink every drop of your
hot sticky cum." As I leaned in to get another taste of his cum cannon, Colin gently touched my chin.

"Later... For now I want to play with you a little." Colin said, almost out of breath himself.
I smirked and stood up, moving over to the bench against the wall. I laid on my side with my legs splayed open
seductively.

"Well then," I said, "Come and get it." Colin moved over to the bench and sat at my feet. He took me by my right
ankle, and started to untie my shoe.

"Careful there, stud," I said, "I forget to wear socks today so my feet might be a little stinky." I giggled.

"Mmm, that's just how I like them." Colin said. He had finished untying my shoe and proceeded to slip it off
of my size eight and a half foot. He lifted my foot up under his nose and I wiggled my toes a little.

"Mmm that feels better." I said. Colin put his nose right up against my toes and took in a long whiff.

"Oh yeah, you were right. Your feet are nice and smelly. Like honey and vinegar." He said, beginning to kiss
the sole of my sweaty foot up and down. After sniffing my toes a little more he began to suck on them, darting
his tongue between all of my toes, savoring the flavor of every one. I slid my hand into my shorts and began
stroking on my already completely erect cock. After a couple of minutes of dragging his tongue up the bottom
of my foot from heel to toe, Colin stopped and reached for my other foot.

"That one's clean now." He said. He untied my other shoe and slid it off. "This one though," he said, "is still
nice and sweaty and stinky. I think it needs a nice tongue bath too." He stuck his nose into my shoe and inhaled
deeply. Then setting the shoe aside he began to suck on my freshy exposed foot, still sticky with workout sweat.

"Mmm that feels good." I said, continuing to massage my dick under my shorts. I began to rub my other foot along
the length of Colin's shaft, gripping his helmet head with my toes and wiggling them all over it. I could feel
more of his precum leaking out in between my toes. Colin watched me stroking myself. After a moment, and to
my tempoorary disappointment, he stopped worshiping my foot. He leaned over me, the way a man does as he prepares
to ravage his lover.

As Colin gripped the waistband of my cute little silken shorts and pulled them down past my knees and over my feet,
he was surprised and excited to see my little pink g-string thong, with a little white ribbon on the front under
the waist. My smooth, plump balls dangled out of one side, while the front of my panties peaked like a tower,
tented up by my raging hard-on, which bounced ever so slightly as my blood pumped through it.

Colin leaned over me and gently rubbed the palm of his hand on my cock over my panties, gently massaging my
balls with his other hand, and periodically licked them and savoring their sweaty flavor.Slowly I closed my eyes
and wriggled with pleasure, biting my lower lip. I wrapped my right leg around his waist and rubbed the sole of
my foot up and down hisleft buttock. Removing his hand Colin could see the wet spot on my panties where my own
precum had seeped through. Colin slid down my body, becoming eye level with my cock tent. He stuck out his tongue
and started licking the tip of my dick through my panties, making "yummy" sounds while he tasted my precum.

"Do you like my cute little panties?" I asked, looking down at Colin, my fingers running through his short brown
hair. Colin looked me over, his eyes glazed over, drunk with lust and desire.

"Oh yeah D... Goddamn you're so fucking sexy" was all he could manage, obviously having reverted most of the blood
flow from his brain to his still throbbing member, continuing to leak precum on my naked thigh. Reaching down
I scooped some of his precum from my thigh with my finger, bringing it back up to to my lips. I happily sucked
his juice from my finger and squealed in delight. Colin obviously couldn't take any more of this. His natural
male instincts had finally taken over. I looked into his eyes, and though saying nothing, he must have heard
my mind saying "Then come and fuck my brains out, baby."

Colin began the final leg of his conquest by moving my g-string to the side. It was the tip of his nose I felt
first, pressing against my pink puckered anus. Slowly and with intention he sniffed my butthole, beginning to
stroke himself. Next it was his tongue, which he used expertly, dragging the length of it over my hole, the
tip of it entering me. He gripped my ass with both hands and lifted my waist off of the bench. He buried his lips
and tongue into my sweet rosebud, savoring every moment. I lifted and spread my legs farther apart, granting
him easier access and offering him his final welcome.

Since the bench was rather narrow, fucking in the missionary position seemed unlikely. Colin sat up against the
wall with his knees spread apart. He looked like a barbarian king, sitting naked on his throne, his massive
manhood towering powerfully into the air.His mighty rod reminded me of a proud young soldier, brimming with
confidence.He was absolutely irresistable, glistening with sweat in this hot,
steamy fuck chamber. I moved down to the floor and knelt before him, once again taking his huge cock
in my mouth. I bobbed my head up and down over his eleven and a half inch serpent, salivating over it
to prepare it for its entrance into my most sacred and intimate of parts. I slowly slid my mouth up over his tip
and replaced it with my hand, with which I gripped him tightly, turning and squeezing it as it moved
up and down his increasingly slippery shaft. My mouth hovered over his testicles and began to tickle them with
the tip of my tongue, occasionally fitting one into my mouth and applying a great deal of suction. Longer
transluscent streams of precum leaked from his cockhole, which I spread around his helmet.

"Come on baby, come get on this dick and take a ride." Said Colin. I didn't need any other invitation. I climbed
up onto the bench and straddled him in the standard cowgirl position. Squeezing my ass cheeks, Colin tore my
g-string, allowing himself full access to my hole. With my right hand on Colin's left shoulder, I reached down with
my right and touched the warm tip of his dick to my entrance. I quivered with arousal at this contact and slowly
guided him in. I lowered myself down upon his shaft inch by inch as it began to sink ever deeper into my asshole.
Finally I could feel his gigantic balls rubbing on my ass cheeks, and I knew he was in me, balls deep. As I began
to wiggle on top of his cock the initial pain quickly turned to unbelievable pleasure. I started moving my hips
in small circles, letting him stir his wholly satisfying fuckstick within my tight and starving fuckhole. Once
my anus had become accustomed to the length and girth of his cock, I began to move up and down on top of him,
slowly at first and building up momentum as we both began to lose control.

Before long Colin's aggressive, masculine nature took over, as he began thrusting in and out of me in time
with my movements. His hands holding tightly on my ass cheeks, spreading them ever further apart, Colin began
to slam me down hard over his dick. With every stroke of our sex, my ass sucked his cock of its precum. I could
feel the pleasant sensation of his warm, gooey pre-ejaculate building up inside me, and leaking down the sides of
his cock, air tight as our connection must have been. As we writhed together in ultimate pleasure, my cock, which
at a healthy eight and half inches still seemed dwarfed compared to his, rubbed up and down against his sweaty,
glistening abs. I wrapped my arms around Colin's neck, bringing us closer together so that my cock could slide
between his bulging ab muscles.

When I said "Fuck me harder, baby," Colin fucked me harder. When I said "Fuck me faster, baby," Colin fucked me
faster. It wasn't long before he was fucking me absolutely silly. After several minutes I couldn't hold out any longer.
Upon one Colin's upward thrusts, I felt the slight vibration at the base of my cock, which quickly turned to an intense
tingle through my shaft, finally ending in a gratuitous burst of cum from the tip of my swolen member, which landed
warm and sticky all over Colin's chest and abbs. The little bit that made it to his chin he licked off with his tongue.

"Oh, shit-- I'm gonna fucking cum!" Colin said.

"Y-yeah?" I replied, continuing to bounce on his cock, my own still pulsating and spurting out more of my own cum onto
his stomach. With my hands I rubbed my cum into his skin like a lotion and licking his chest, savoring the sweet
concoction of his sweat and my own cum.

"Yeah... yeah, baby, it's about to.. It's coming!" Colin said, frantic and nearly out of breath.

"Wait!" I said. "I told you I wanted to drink every drop of your cum!" I lifted myself
off of his naked cock and back down to my knees where I lowered my mouth over his dick again and took it down my
throat to the hilt. Using my lips and mouth for suction, I swirled my tongue around the underside of his cock nice and
slowly. I had to admit that his cock tasted a lot better after it had been pounding my little anus for the last few
minutes.This was apparently enough to cause the cum eruption of the century, as load after load of his hot, pearly
ejaculate filled my mouth. I tried to keep up, swallowing each load of cum that burst forth from his cock, but there
was so much that it began to dribble out of the sides of my mouth. Colin continued to feed me load after load after
load of his cum, and I felt like I was trying to drink from the best kind of fire hose I had ever heard of.Colin moaned
loudly, lost in his own world of total erotic pleasure. Finally, he began to tire, and he removed his now only
semi-erect cock from my lips. Swallowing the last bits of cum in my mouth, I licked my lips and the sides of my mouth
to collect whatever was left. I made sure to give his cock a nice cleaning, just to make sure I made good on my word
not to waste a single drop. I loved the way his thick, warm, creamy cum felt as it slid down the back of my throat.
If only I could have a steady supply I would surely become an addict.

My body spent, I laid on the floor of the steam room, gently rubbing my cock and massaging my anus in a state of
post coital bliss. Colin Joined me on the floor and took me in his arms. Our naked, sweaty bodies lay there spooning;
Colin's cock nestled cosily between my ass cheeks. A real gentle man, he gently massaged my now-going-flacid
gland as we breathed heavily in the quiet, the only sound coming from the steam filling the room.

"I guess tonight was my lucky night." I said, smiling, cuddling up against him. "If only I could multiply you a few
times over, I'd never run out of that delicious cum of yours, and I could suck your cock all day long."

"Suppose you could." Colin said coyly. "Give me your number and I'll show you a whole new world."

"Intriguing," I said, "But what exactly are you talking about?"

"Meet me here same time tomorrow," He said, "And you'll see what I mean."
Urici
12/10/14 03:34PM
TL;DR?
HumptyDumpty
12/10/14 04:29PM
TL;DR: sex.
Darknavyman
12/10/14 04:47PM
Very well written!
Urici
12/10/14 05:20PM
HumptyDumpty said:
TL;DR: sex.
Darknavyman said:
Very well written!

Yes.
KingDDD
12/10/14 10:33PM
Not bad. Not bad at all ;)
juicyholes
12/11/14 05:59AM
Thanks guys. This was the first erotic short story I've ever posted. It was inspired by an RP I did with one of you on this site. I have more on the way, and I'm always open to ideas of things you might want to read about. Also, if you know of any other good places to post things like this, let me know. I think I could possibly have some potential with this :)

BTW, forgive me but I'm kind of a noob. What does TL;DR mean?
Shaded_Cube
12/11/14 06:33AM
Too long; didn't read.
Darknavyman
12/11/14 06:34AM
Keep them coming, juicyholes
juicyholes
12/11/14 07:40AM
Ah yes,

Reading is hard for some people. Anyway, if anyone ever wants to RP this with me just let me know.
Femme_Fatale
12/11/14 06:53PM
Why did this have to be gay erotica x.x
Darknavyman
12/11/14 06:55PM
What would you prefer, Femme_Fatale? Just use your imagination to put this literary work of art into a different scenario. *Wink
Femme_Fatale
12/11/14 07:06PM
Darknavyman said:
What would you prefer, Femme_Fatale? Just use your imagination to put this literary work of art into a different scenario. *Wink


There are a lot of things I would prefer, but I can't just "use my imagination" while reading this. I would have to rewrite the entire thing out, and that would take far too much effort as I'm not willing to go back into writing erotica anytime soon.
juicyholes
12/12/14 06:41AM
@Femme-Fatale
I'm not sure, but I think I've heard SOME rumors that there MIGHT be other erotic fiction on the internet. Don't get your hopes up though, cause it's a small place and options are very limited. Kind of like your energy, which might be better spent focusing on things you're into rather than complaining about something that simply isn't your cup of tea. I challenge you to write your own piece, but if you're too lazy to do anything but complain, I doubt you have the self discipline. Take care :)
Rule:#3
12/12/14 10:46PM
This is by far the gayiest story I have ever heard. XD
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